Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
These days, the underdeveloped countries are facing a lot of problems in different sectors. The industrialized nations in such situation have the obligation to help out these countries in the enhancement of business, medicine and literacy, as these areas are considered to be the vital factors for the country’s development. This essay will argue that why without the support of the developed states, it is unlikely for the poorer nations to eradicate these issues.
To begin with, health, education and trade are the building blocks of the nations, and if anyone of them is absent, the country may face catastrophe. The well-educated youth along with business brings innovation to the country which strengthens the financial conditions. To exemplify, the US is now the leading financial state due to their corporate sector and well talented populace. In addition, poor healthcare leads to disappointment and deteriorates the peace of mind, even in worst case scenarios, the skillful people often leave the nations due to non-availability of appointments and settles abroad. This can be evidently seen in Canada, where the major cause of brain drain is their broken health care system. Therefore, it is undeniable that these three sectors are indispensable for the country prosperity.
However, improvement in these areas cannot be guaranteed without the aid of richer countries. Their financial support has the potential to make the country out of their challenging times, which can be used for upgradation of schools or colleges, or even hospitals. Some countries are competent enough that they can figure out the rest, after a little push. For example, 70% of Germany was destroyed in World War 2, but due to the assistance of the other nations, now it is standing in the list of financially strong countries. Furthermore, it can strengthen the relationship between them, which can letter prove be more beneficial for business and trade. Hence, the peace in the world will prevail, if the countries stay united during the best and the worst times.
This essay argued that why educational, business and medical progress of developing nations are dependent on developed countries. In my opinion, it is absolute imperative for the rich nations to help the poor countries in growth and success, because it is for the mutual benefit of both countries and the entire world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 480, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the worst'.
Suggestion: in the worst
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2004.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24607329843 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96668822108 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549738219895 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1809582537 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.882352941 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4705882353 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208121347791 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637551295287 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586567548966 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140209687164 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543751956457 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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