The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps detailed elucidate alternations to the Norbiton industral area, as well as, the planned future development.

Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that both industrial area of Norbiton and the planned devlopment is located at the East side of the town, with a river on the North and main road at the
extreme South, separating the farmland from the industrial are which in the centre of the map. Another point worth considered is this area has become more residential and offers more access for localities.

Initially observing at the entire set of maps, the most remarkable change is the replacement
the factories with the housings. There are newly built accessibilities around the roundabout such as shops and medical centre, Moreover, the road infrastructure is completely developed to accommodate the needs for residential area, school and playground.

Moving Northwards from these facilites, a bridge is planned to cross the river and provides access to the housings that will be located in farmland. Main road at the extreme South remains with an additional roundabout

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33898305085 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96787141179 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61581920904 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.0594322344 43.030603864 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.0 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 22.9334400587 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183566731483 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771401955058 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688102016066 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088783504345 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0650364946428 0.0819641961636 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.06136585366 118% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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