The maps illustrate the change of shape of Riverage college in now compared to the 30 years ago.
As can be seen from the maps, there are the same spare; however in the present days, the decoration of this school is more eco-system by eradicated car park.
Initially, in the west of the college, the sport hall is remained intact and beside of it is flower in the past that was eliminated by steps to move on the terrace. Next to the terrace, In the north-west, there have three block; however all of them are converted, excepting a library in the middle of others. A common room in the initial building made way for café and in the top, refectory room is replaced by office
In the north-east, the college had a row of three building which the library is stayed unchanged and in the top of those building the four offices in 30 years ago are replaced to art-class, doubling square of two stairs of offices. Now, Music room is added in the ground of this building that near reception location. In the east of the campus, the replacement of car part to become more eco-system by planted trees.
- The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The chart below shows estimated world literacy rates by region and by gender for the year 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words. 56
- The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. 73
- The maps below show the information about the change of Riverage college 30 years ago and now. 73
- The bar chart below shows the different types of accommodation chosen by the British when they went on holiday in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'spares'?
Suggestion: spares
... seen from the maps, there are the same spare; however in the present days, the decor...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'block' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'blocks'.
Suggestion: blocks
...ce, In the north-west, there have three block; however all of them are converted, exc...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 417, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...op, refectory room is replaced by office In the north-east, the college had a row...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...come more eco-system by planted trees.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49751243781 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47746208262 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572139303483 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.1173873557 43.030603864 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.142857143 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7142857143 22.9334400587 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 5.23603664747 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17704870521 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963821420615 0.103423049105 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.182910416005 0.0843802449381 217% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161906245776 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.221509400114 0.0819641961636 270% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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