The given maps illustrate the main change's which have take place in the town of strokeford from 1930 to the present. It is a clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen that shops near the post office are removed now.Furthermore,it was noticed that garden and large house were replaced and now retirement house took its place.
Moving ahead,it was seen that primary school is enlarged now,apart from all this,it is seen that more houses are built with in the time.
Overall,it is Evident that the town has shown an increase in housing development which indicates a higher population from agriculture and farming.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Endah Astuti
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Furthermore
...ps near the post office are removed now.Furthermore,it was noticed that garden and large ho...
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Line 3, column 75, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... post office are removed now.Furthermore,it was noticed that garden and large house...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...nt house took its place. Moving ahead,it was seen that primary school is enlarge...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , apart
...seen that primary school is enlarged now,apart from all this,it is seen that more hous...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...hool is enlarged now,apart from all this,it is seen that more houses are built with...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...s are built with in the time. Overall,it is Evident that the town has shown an i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 10.0 33.7804878049 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 533.0 965.302439024 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 104.0 196.424390244 53% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.19343686757 3.73543355544 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85379367047 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.721153846154 0.547539520022 132% => OK
syllable_count: 162.0 283.868780488 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.952701851 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0355365922925 0.215688989381 16% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0220615041679 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441230083358 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0250275791406 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433490386619 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 51.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 9
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