the map gives information about the plan to develop an industrial area in the town of Norbiton into a residential area over the period. overall, the idea is to redevelop into an urban area with more houses and complementary facilities.
recently, the areas is dominated by a lot of manufactures along the the road, with two types of road. the first one is a roundabout in the middle of the map with three factories around them. after that, there is a straight road on the east side of the map with five manufactures along the road. on the north side, a river separates farmland areas and industrial are with no connection bridge.
meanwhile, one of the redevelopment is to change all factories into housing. there are two additional roads and a new circle road in the south side of the map. next, the space of farmland will decrease because of the development of new houses and new bridge to connect the center area. lastly, the master plan is to add more facilities such as: playground, shops, medical center and school, which brings enormous advantages for residents
- The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site Summerise the information by selectig and reporting the main features and make comprarison where relevant 78
- The maps below shows an industrial area in the town of Norbition and planned future development of the site Summerise the information by selectig and reporting the main features and make comprarison where relevant 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rcle road in the south side of the map. next, the space of farmland will decrease be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 885.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75806451613 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73379034782 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564516129032 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.7817909744 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158023327584 0.215688989381 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650897725458 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815820730662 0.0843802449381 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123191191238 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0861733697437 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.