The diagrams show the layout of the central library two decades ago and that of today
20 years ago, the common function of the central library serves for reading generally. It is clear to see that two round tables and chairs. On the right side of the tables, enquiry desk room, which encompasses tickets, book returns and some identify papers, the adult non-fiction books room, and the children's books room are arranged by the more near distance from the entrance. On the other side of the tables, the computer room, all reference books room and CDs, and video computer games are arranged in the same criteria.
By today, the central library be changed dramatically to be compatible with
the reader's needs. The most notable change is the demolition of round tables and chairs at the center of the map, which led to the foyer being more spacious. The enquiry desk was replaced by a brand-new coffee shop, while the children's books room transform into a lecture room. It is also noteworthy to note that the three self-service machines were installed with an information desk and the alleviated adult-fiction books sequences in the middle of the lecture room and the brand-new cafe. Additionally, the reading room was converted into a computer room with many up-to-date applications. Of a particular change, the all reference books room with have smaller acreage than the old adult fiction books room, was erected. Directly facilitated the expansion of the below children's fiction books room, where was install 2 sofas and the storytelling stage to reach children's curious minds about books in the innovative media.
- Some people think a job not only provides income but also social life Others think it is better to develop social life with people you do not work with Discuss both view and give your own opinion 73
- The maps detail the changes to the layout of a public library between 20 years ago and present day 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 813, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'installed'.
Suggestion: installed
...childrens fiction books room, where was install 2 sofas and the storytelling stage to r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 268.0 196.424390244 136% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0671641791 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62731085102 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537313432836 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2576770549 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.454545455 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3636363636 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0812631582194 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038169795892 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750635327595 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877903940509 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0551169263354 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 40.7170731707 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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