The maps give information about a university sports court

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The maps give information about a university sports court.

Given are the two maps delineating the transformations of a university sports court during a course of time from 1990 to present. Perceptibly, the region has experienced exponential modifications with the elimination of park and car park, tennis course along with the addition of facilities for sport.
There was a park in the north west and the car park in the south west in 1990 which have been replaced by basketball court and tennis courts respectively. Meanwhile, there is a plateau of café shops in the north and the reception in the center of the diagram. Additional development is that the tennis court in the south east was removed to make room for a fitness center, while the changing room has relocated in the north of the fitness center. Furthermore, the outdoor pool has begun as an indoor pool. Strikingly, in the east of the sports court has ringed all facilities in the east of the university sport.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 760.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81012658228 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88329868593 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525316455696 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0206518421 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.571428571 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208904861696 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980905395078 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105800738545 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168582520484 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182087483273 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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