The maps illustrate an industrial area in Norbiton in the present day compared with plans for future development of the site

The graph compares the current Norbiton industrial area with the proposal plan of the site.
Overall, the changes consist of expanding, replacing and building new areas for the site to accommodate people better.
The road on the southern side of the *be specific* map will have a roundabout in the middle of the road. On the left of the first roundabout, a Medical centre will be added. The shops will be constructed on the southwestern side of the second roundable, which will remain the same in both maps. All the factories will be replaced with Housing facilities on the east, northwest, and north side of the map.
The road on the eastern side of the big roundable will lead to<have> 2 new buildings that will be constructed in the future plan, which are School and playground, with School will be built at the end of the road while the Playground will be built on the north of the road accompanied with the east housing facility. The northwest side of the second roundable, a road will be built and leads to the northwest housing facility. On the northern side of the map the farmland will be moved to accommodate the new housing facility with the road leading up to it.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 1.00243902439 1097% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65071770335 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59702411172 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464114832536 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8134696551 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2222222222 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14109973 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869038983649 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120178851869 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159334396921 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146246496617 0.0819641961636 178% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.