Essay topics:
My hobby
My hobby reading books.im read new books and story's.
I love the romantic story's.
I like play the game .
My hobby play the football.
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2019-06-10 | Gurjit kaur81 | 22 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... romantic storys. I like play the game . My hobby play the football.
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 33.7804878049 3% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 113.0 965.302439024 12% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 24.0 196.424390244 12% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70833333333 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.2133638394 3.73543355544 59% => The fourth root words length is low.
Word Length SD: 2.23642571976 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 18.0 106.607317073 17% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.75 0.547539520022 137% => OK
syllable_count: 32.4 283.868780488 11% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 6.0 22.4926829268 27% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 11.7260393996 43.030603864 27% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 28.25 112.824112599 25% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 6.0 22.9334400587 26% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.0 5.23603664747 0% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402088338953 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.224434083301 0.103423049105 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.24276367578 0.0843802449381 288% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224434083301 0.15604864568 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.24276367578 0.0819641961636 296% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 3.8 13.2329268293 29% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.77 61.2550243902 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 2.1 10.3012195122 20% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 11.4140731707 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 5.0 40.7170731707 12% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 2.0 11.4329268293 17% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 4.4 10.9970731707 40% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 4.0 11.0658536585 36% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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