New student enrollment in top Australian University and applications to Australian University majors
Two graphs above show the number of freshmen enrolled at Australian Universities and the flood of applications to the major courses offered there in 1997,2002 and 2007
Overall, the number of students engaging in these above universities had significantly increased in each period except for Queensland School. The vast majority students entered in all these leading Australian University, especially Sydney's University had the highest proportion of participants staying at approximately 15000 members in 2007 . It’s nearly twice as much as 1997's level. In 2007 , the quantity of students attending Australian National University is the second highest rate , followed by the university of Melbourne and Queenland in the 2007 period respectively .As soon as choosing their desired university, Pupils continued choose their favourite majors. Most students registered engineering and business courses, whereas history's one had the least number of applications. Due to the fact that global economy is developing day by day , so engineering and business courses are the popular Majors for everyone. History is probably
boring for students , so there are very few students electing.
In conclusion, most pupils were encouraged to study at these leading Australian university and choose trending majors. Bar charts show by increase in the of new enrollment of university of Sydney and Australian Nation university. In addition, engineering and business remained referred courses at the top universities in Australian.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to trend'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, whereas, except for, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 224.0 196.424390244 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11289703545 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7698012563 43.030603864 192% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.8 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.446503398717 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167408640747 0.103423049105 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114698190808 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268027727213 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115451206327 0.0819641961636 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 61.2550243902 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.37 11.4140731707 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.8 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 40.7170731707 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.