Nguyen Duc Chau
The Letters
19 , Le Duan Street
Soc Trang - Vietnam
The Director
English for Today Centre
731 Van Xuan Street
Hanoi - Vietnam
25/10/2020
Dear Sir,
I am writing to complain about the poor quality of the service at your centre. Everything seems to worse than what you say in the advertisement.
Most of them are Vietnamese teachers not foreigners as advertised. A class is often very crowded, exceeding the number of studens listed on the brochure. Everything is not free, i had to pay for books and cassettes tapes. They do not have an air conditioner, which is bad, they use a fan to replace them. There is one more problem, they said the class will start from 6:30 p.m to 9.30p.m but it is not like that! Classes usually start lat and end very soon.
T resolve the problem, i require you to give me a refund. Enclosed is a copy of the receipt.
I look forward to hearing from you and to getting a quick resolution of this problem. Please contact me at the above address or by phone at 0869 248 909
Yours faithfully
Nguyen Duc Chau
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 3, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
19 , Le Duan Street Soc ...
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Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
19 , Le Duan Street Soc Trang - Vietnam The Director Engli...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sh for Today Centre 731 Van Xuan Street Hanoi - Vietnam 2...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... 731 Van Xuan Street Hanoi - Vietnam 25/10/2020 Dear Sir, I am writing to...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n the brochure. Everything is not free, i had to pay for books and cassettes tape...
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Line 13, column 24, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... end very soon. T resolve the problem, i require you to give me a refund. Enclos...
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Line 15, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... phone at 0869 248 909 Yours faithfully Nguyen Duc Chau
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58288770053 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50407424244 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.547539520022 133% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.4639090493 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.9090909091 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.18181818182 5.23603664747 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0712244343474 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0214046981745 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676875988597 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.15604864568 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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