nitrogen is very important for the life on earth. Over 90% of the earth's supply exists as a gas in the atmosphere. The diagram below describes the nitrogen cycle.
The picture illustrates the cycle of nitrogen, a crucial element to the earth.
Overall, there are two main stages of the cycle, where nitrogen exists in two types of condition: gaseous nitrogen and nitrate. The beginning step is to fixate gas while the last step is the denitrification process back into gas.
More than 90% of the earth’s atmosphere exists in the form of gas. To begin with, the lightning contributes gaseous nitrogen to the soil, which is later absorbed by the plants. Then, the nitrogen is transformed into grass, after the animals eat it, it becomes protein to supply the animals’ needs. When the animals die, the protein from dead bodies decompose into ammonium, then lastly into nitrate.
Gaseous nitrogen is also fixated by plants before turning into ammonium, then nitrite and lastly nitrate. The nitrate, in the last step, undergoes a denitrification process before being returned to the earth’s atmosphere.
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- In many countries children participate in some paid work in their spare time Some people think that this is wrong but others believe that such work will extend children s knowledge and increase their sense of responsibility What is your opinion 73
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
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- Modern technology has greatly influenced people s ways of entertainment making people less creative Do you agree or disagree 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, then, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24342105263 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71313587974 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585526315789 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.3511697747 43.030603864 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.5555555556 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247970688988 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117450961413 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0946412671382 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169267501597 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608427478634 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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