Nowadays, a considerable number of people are opting for entrepreneurship as their career instead of working for other organization. However, this essay will highlight why this trend is being popular in recent time, and explain what bad consequences can be accrued while leading a business.
To start with, there are a number of reasons which are encouraging people to do their own startup rather than working in a company. First and foremost is they are the boss of their own, and this has been providing them with the sense of comfort in making their own timetable to carry a task. Secondly, working for self has several other benefits while working in an organization can be a hurdle to become rich because employers have set parameter for salary, whereas a businessman can earn more than the expectation on his favourable day, for example, during the festival time, goldsmiths earn unimaginable money which is not possible for any employee who works for a company.
On the other hand, although self-employment has various positives, it is sometimes turned into a complex problem for many businessmen such as financial loss in any project. Despite a plethora of money, they will have to listen to their clients when they are not satisfied with the service or products. Moreover, an entrepreneur always needs to be immensely flexible, suppose someone is catching a flight at 1 am at night so that he /she can attend the business meeting. If someone has no financial backup to support the business in critical time then that person may go bankrupt, to exemplify, in 2018 Ahmedabad a fire had burnt several garment showrooms but after one year only few garment store opened because the rest of the other business person had no money to restart their clothing store.
To conclude, although, self-employment is turning out to be the most significant career option for many youths, reading business fundamentals are a must before starting up a business.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, whereas, while, for example, such as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 5.60731707317 339% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 965.302439024 169% => OK
No of words: 325.0 196.424390244 165% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03076923077 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86087006255 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 106.607317073 188% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 283.868780488 180% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.2812103658 43.030603864 194% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.5 112.824112599 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8 5.23603664747 264% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290342241114 0.215688989381 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105975210454 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864555161825 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191724298954 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0638183575379 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.2329268293 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.49 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 40.7170731707 187% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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