The bar chart below shows the number(in thousands) of student who to study different university subject in 2005.The chart groups the student according each subject are divided into male and female.There are clear different between the men's and women choice of subject.Overall the number of male choice in all the subject but unevenly.The number of male chose subject ranged from the highest number of just over 23 thousands to the lowest number of just over 3 thousands. Science and Mathematics were the most popular chose for male student (over 20 thousands) but Mathematics weren't more popular with female student(only 5 thousand).Beside we see that the men chose to study Science,Mathematics,Literature and Law more popular the women,while Social Sciences is the best subject for women to chose(25 thousands).However the female students chose to study Mathematics and Law only 4 and 5 thousands.Especially, just as many male as female chose to study Humanities. In short, the graph shows a clear disproportion between the number of men and women in each subject.In the future,these data can change through every years and the estimated number is unpredictable.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, while, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32786885246 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.70320898086 2.65546596893 139% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.513661202186 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 22.4926829268 271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.245562833 43.030603864 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 325.0 112.824112599 288% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.0 22.9334400587 266% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 5.23603664747 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 1.69756097561 884% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343192150894 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.214890069042 0.103423049105 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121767151719 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227451605462 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106627746698 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 13.2329268293 258% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 1.1 61.2550243902 2% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.51609756098 262% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 10.3012195122 275% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.4329268293 258% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.9970731707 240% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 11.0658536585 271% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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