OIL

Essay topics:

OIL

The bar chart illustrates the daily production of oil in six Middle East countries from 1990 to 2010.
Overall, Saudi Arabia was the biggest oil producer throughout the given period, as opposed to Qatar which was the smallest one. It is also clear that the amount of oil from Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, UAE, and Saudi Arabia produced on a daily basis experienced a clear upward trend between 1990 and 2010 whereas the figure for Qatar changed slightly with an unpredictable pattern.
Over the 20 years, the largest oil producer was Saudi Arabia. It can be seen from the chart that the amount of oil this country produced every day had approximately doubled by 2010 from about 8 to 16 million barrels. Iran became ranked second with around 3 million barrels in 1990, and then its figure rose consistently from 3 to 4 million barrels between 1990 and in 2010.
The daily production of oil in Qatar was the smallest during the given period. The daily production capacity of this country grew negligibly to a million barrels before constantly dropping to about a half of a million barrels and remaining at this level until 2010. By comparison, the UEA entered period stability and produced the same amount of oil daily, at about 2 million barrels, from 1990 to 2000 and then its figure rose slightly by 0.5 million barrels during the last five years.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s also clear that the amount of oil from Iran, Iraq, Kuwait, UAE, and Saudi Arabi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, then, whereas

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 233.0 196.424390244 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77253218884 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4503919656 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523605150215 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0668171556 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.555555556 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8888888889 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 5.23603664747 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234057147025 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140546369492 0.103423049105 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855510741425 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176405324539 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192050191629 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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