Overall, neither owned nor rented accommodation kept the same percentage of households during that period of time, except in 1971 which it was equal (50% each one). Besides, (neither) none of them represented more than 80% of households from 1918 to 2011.
In terms of rented accommodation, the percentage of households was decreasing progressively from 1918 to 2001 in spite of (however) it is showed a high percentage during the first 43 years (from 1918 to 1961). Then, in 1971, It reached the same percentage with the owned accommodation (both, 50 percentage percent). Finally, 2011 (-had-) represented a year of recuperation (recovery) in comparison with a decade ago.
On the other hand, although owned accommodation began with a minimum percentage of households (almost more than 20 percentage) in 1918, it was increasing until 1961. Besides, in 1971, it represented the 50 percentage (percent) of households, it meant, the same amount with the rented accommodation. However, it started (became) decreasing during the next 30 years (from 1981 to 2001). Finally, (it showed an increase of a small percent in 2011) can increase a small percentage in 2011 (from 31% in 2001 to 35 percentage in 2011, approximately).
Overall, neither owned nor rented accommodation kept the same percentage of households during that period of time, except in 1971 which it was equal (50% each one). Besides, (neither) none of them represented more than 80% of households from 1918 to 2011.
In terms of rented accommodation, the percentage of households was decreasing progressively from 1918 to 2001 in spite of (however) it is showed a high percentage during the first 43 years (from 1918 to 1961). Then, in 1971, It reached the same percentage with the owned accommodation (both, 50 percentage percent). Finally, 2011 (-had-) represented a year of recuperation (recovery) in comparison with a decade ago.
On the other hand, although owned accommodation began with a minimum percentage of households (almost more than 20 percentage) in 1918, it was increasing until 1961. Besides, in 1971, it represented the 50 percentage (percent) of households, it meant, the same amount with the rented accommodation. However, it started (became) decreasing during the next 30 years (from 1981 to 2001). Finally, (it showed an increase of a small percent in 2011) can increase a small percentage in 2011 (from 31% in 2001 to 35 percentage in 2011, approximately).
- Some people say that companies who sponsor big games can gain a lot other people believe that it has disadvantages for them Discuss both sides and give your opinion 73
- The table below gives data on the hour of leisure time per year for people in Someland Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- The charts below show the growth in the population in some of the world s largest cities as well as the population distribution in urban and rural areas 73
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or events Do you think this is a positive or negative development 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 100, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...me percentage of households during that period of time, except in 1971 which it was equal 50% ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, however, so, then, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13265306122 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10257782677 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505102040816 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 291.6 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9919745035 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.777777778 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 5.23603664747 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.554462207563 0.215688989381 257% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.239251344074 0.103423049105 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19232612152 0.0843802449381 228% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.47152015963 0.15604864568 302% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.286701655933 0.0819641961636 350% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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