Parents spend little free time with children. Why? Who are more affected, parents or children?
n this day and age, parents tend to swamp with their responsibilities at their workplace and at home.This trend could be attributable to the matter is that they did not have spend enough quality time for their children.There are host of reasons to account for this and children are the victims of this phenomenon
On the one hand, parents seem to leave little time for their children in nowadays ,To live up to the fullest for their family demand and raise their childrens .As matter of a fact ,parents now have to be caught up in their work at office.And even there are some parents against the clock at work to get work done and come home late at night as a way of helping them to bring home the bacon. Therefore, it is easy to make parents forget to call or remind their children when they do not stay at home. Furthermore, Parents are also frequently busy with parties, events, so on…besides work with co-worker or customers .So the less opportunities children have to share their stories or some matter they encountered with their parents.And hearty dinner or lunch with parents gradually appear.
On the other hand, due to lack of quality interaction with parents.It would seriously destroy communication of children with either society or parents, family members and relatives.They gradually seek the anonymity on the internet and indulge themself in virtual world. Somehhow they become more solitary in their own world .This could be surely deteriorate their health in physically and mentally a lot.Such as it make their eyesight be more and more weaken or catch autism.
In conclusion. I strongly agree that parents in general should made more much time to teach and share with their children in the life to strengthen the bond between them and give their children aprropriate orientation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, in general, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 19.0 6.8 279% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 5.60731707317 589% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 965.302439024 156% => OK
No of words: 305.0 196.424390244 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93442622951 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72609888985 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 283.868780488 161% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 22.4926829268 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 203.412118115 43.030603864 473% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 250.833333333 112.824112599 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.8333333333 22.9334400587 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.5 5.23603664747 353% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 1.69756097561 1178% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303822714472 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144828057319 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907885988602 0.0843802449381 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20573030955 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645085083108 0.0819641961636 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.2 13.2329268293 206% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 29.19 61.2550243902 48% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.3012195122 210% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 40.7170731707 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 11.4329268293 472% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.9970731707 200% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 11.0658536585 199% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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