Universities are a stage for competition. some people attend a university to pursue their dreams, of being someone important and impactful. Some want to have a professional and of course well-paid career. While there are some people who view it as a contest, and they want to win and be the best. Whatever people view it, it does worth it.
All the people around us had plans for their future, actually for being successful. Some wanted to be a doctor, or engineer or an astronaut. In fact, everyone had big dreams for their future and what they want to be. Some attend a university to get close to their dreams. Actually, it is a step they had to pass in order to fulfill their wishes.
Attending the university will enhance the chances to get a good job. Skills and knowledge are the two main factor that makes people capable of doing professional tasks rather than simple ones. And the university is where these two can be obtained. Therefore, attending a university, on some level, can guarantee a perfect career in the future.
For some people attend a university is a way to show their perfectness. They view it as a competition to prove themselves as a smart and professional person. Some people are just obsessed with being seen as the best one. And attending a good university is a chance for them to boast about their capabilities.
No matter what is your motivation to obtain a university degree, it is a way leads to success. Studying will increase the level of knowledge and skills. Whether you want to fulfill your dreams, or having a good job, or just want to succeed in the competition, it ends well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...iversities are a stage for competition. some people attend a university to pursue th...
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Line 3, column 5, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
...eople view it, it does worth it. All the people around us had plans for their future, actually fo...
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Line 9, column 275, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...cceed in the competition, it ends well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, so, therefore, well, while, in fact, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 965.302439024 139% => OK
No of words: 287.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68292682927 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7278424982 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 106.607317073 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508710801394 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 421.2 283.868780488 148% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.482926829268 1242% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 8.94146341463 235% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.1415770239 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.0 112.824112599 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 22.9334400587 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.23603664747 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 3.70975609756 485% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249549719415 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863733114429 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663302156583 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155215598368 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419918253039 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.2329268293 56% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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