People often find making changes difficult in their lives due to some reasons. This essay agrees with this statement because lots of articles and books have been published to encourage people psychologically to make improvements in their lives and not to be afraid of being mistaken.
It is evident that having graduated the university persons try to find a good job, then get married and have children. It's certanily true that family is the most valued thing in real life. However, sometimes it makes people not to take risks having being afraid of hurt to close people.Take for example just one person, having a loan, he goes to work every day whether he likes it or doesn't. Moreover,he doesn't change anything due to the payments that he gets at the end of month. Not surprisingly,he is afraid of taking risks thinking about his family and in that way forgetting about his aim which he had made when he was 18 years old. Furthemore,people are said not to have changed anything in their lives,because in case of taking risks, they could lose what they have already had and their family would definitely suffer from that.For this reason, humanity resist of changings in order to defence people who they love and by doing this survive in reality. A good idea would be if government include into curriculum at university or college how to plan and organise steps of their lives. It might help learners to think carefully steps they are planning to do in the future.
Another example of rejecting making new changes is past experiences. No one cannot deny the fact that, if you have been mistaken once,you would not do that again.Because,you know what results to expect.However,researchers claim that if you do the same thing twice,you might have different results.Take for example,an inventor Tomas Edison,who had been trying to do the same thing for 999 times a century ago,but he reported that he hadn't lost. He had 999 ways to complete what he had started.Anyway,he could do it and became one of the well-know investors in the world.Consequently, articles of business people have been published by encouraging people not to give up even in the case if results are ther worst. People should take examples of famous people and draw attention what decisions had been made when it happened with them.
To conclude,people should not afraid of being mistaken and resist making changes.Possible solutions are firstly,to learn organising the life from university or college age.Secondly,follow successful people's traits and pay attention to tips they offer.As a result,people will not probably reject to make any new changes,because,even if it does not work out, they won't definitely give up and move on keeping.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, you know, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 7.0 400% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 1.00243902439 1297% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 6.8 382% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 3.15609756098 507% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 59.0 5.60731707317 1052% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 83.0 33.7804878049 246% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3068.0 965.302439024 318% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 640.0 196.424390244 326% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79375 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02973371873 3.73543355544 135% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48773357886 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 310.0 106.607317073 291% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.484375 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 962.1 283.868780488 339% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 1.53170731707 849% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 1.07073170732 747% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 34.0 8.94146341463 380% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5460040769 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2352941176 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8235294118 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 1.69756097561 1591% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 3.70975609756 404% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214222143239 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059060796439 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050659920926 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132834588667 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0243027671002 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 40.7170731707 305% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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