The percentage of car ownership in Great Britain acoording to household from 1961 to 2001.

Essay topics:

The percentage of car ownership in Great Britain acoording to household from 1961 to 2001.

The line graph below illustrates the percentage of car possession in the UK according to families from 1961 to 2001.

Overall, the general trend of car ownership was upward in the period of 40 years. Moreover, most people had 2+ cars in those years.

In the years from 1961 to 1971, it has a dramatic change in the percentage of car possession. In 1961, the people who had no car were about 70%, it decreased steeply in the next 10 years, and in 1971, it was approximately 38%. while the percentage of car ownership of 1 car and 2+ cars growed quickly and reached respectively 38% and 30% in 1971.

Between 1971 and 2001, it continued to change. The percentage of people who had no car went down sharply to 10% in 2001. There was an upturn in the percentage of 1 car ownership, while in 2+ cars possession it had a moderate climb and reached 48% at the end of this period.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'graphs'.
Suggestion: graphs
The line graph below illustrates the percentage of car...
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Line 9, column 228, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... and in 1971, it was approximately 38%. while the percentage of car ownership of 1 ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 728.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46625766871 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61008158417 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.515337423313 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 199.8 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6922982167 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8888888889 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343799826568 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162436335444 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08000678409 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22768340363 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662504395347 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 61.2550243902 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.3012195122 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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