The line graph shows the proportion of people rating certain factors as importance when buying a new house.
First of all, crime rate, about 85% of the oldest group, was the highest among five factors while only about 6% of the youngest group rated public transport which was the lowest. Moreover, both four groups of the people rated crime rate and public transport as the most important one and the least important one respectively.
Apart from that, the percentage of crime rate increased from about 80% rated by the youngest group to about 85% rated by the oldest group. Likewise, shopping facilities, parks and public transport respectively rose from about 13%, 6%, 5% rated by the youngest group to about 30%, 23%, 22% rated by the oldest group. On the other hand, the proportion of schools declined from 55% rated by the youngest group to 24% rated by the oldest group.
To sum up, the factors of crime rate and public transport were respectively treated as the most important one and the least important one when buying a new house. Also, the graph shows a trend that the younger group prefers the factor of schools than the elder group but the elder group prefers the factors of crime rate, shopping facilities, parks and public transport than the younger group.
- Percentage of people rating certain factors as important when buying a new house 84
- International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment.Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?Give reasons for your ans 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, likewise, moreover, so, while, apart from, in fact, first of all, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 219.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85844748858 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31508200261 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.415525114155 0.547539520022 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.748907326 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.375 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.0 5.23603664747 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336717492558 0.215688989381 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209403418562 0.103423049105 202% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19409011037 0.0843802449381 230% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302852574519 0.15604864568 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.212361191327 0.0819641961636 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 8.06136585366 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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