The table illustrates the proportion of schoolboy in two different age groups who took part in 5 different sport in the Uk in 2010.
The percentage of schoolboy who participated in 5 different sports decreased significantly when they got older. Football and cricket saw the most attracted youngster boys in the UK in 2010.
The proportion of UK younger boys in playing football was about 87% at the age of 6-11, while the figure for 12-16-year-old boys fell to 78%. Cricket was much more preferred by 6-11-year-old boys than another age group. The figure were 45% anf 34% respectively.
The percentage of schoolboy who 6-11 years old played basketball was about 35%. The figure for 12-16-year-old boys was lower, at about 25%. Around 23% of 6-11-year-old boys preferred rugby, compared to around 21% of 12-16-year-old. The proportion of UK young boys in swimming was equal, at 19%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 81, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 744.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 147.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0612244898 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48200454523 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13303527549 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544217687075 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3856874202 43.030603864 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7 22.9334400587 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.9 5.23603664747 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341957192859 0.215688989381 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145801380997 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149015979279 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273589739862 0.15604864568 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.172708184748 0.0819641961636 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 61.2550243902 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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