The picture below shows the life cycle of the salmon.
The diagrams below illustrate the life routine of a fish namely salmon. It can be clearly seen from the diagrams that salmon travel back to the place where they were born to lay eggs.
Firstly, salmon eggs located in upper river with slow moving and after about five to six month they become fry which every species can reach 3 to 8 cm. Then fry move to lower river have fast slowing instead of slow while people call them smolt. In addition, in 4 years living there saw a sharp increase in length of smolt, they can be 1,5 to 4 time as long as fry.
Mean while, smolt go to the sea where they completely grow up and be a adult salmon which have total length from 70 to just under 80 cm, the longest one in fry, smolt , and salmon. after 5 year, adult salmon have a journey home from the ocean to where they were an eggs and start a new life cycle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...slow moving and after about five to six month they become fry which every species can...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: MEAN_WHILE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meanwhile'?
Suggestion: Meanwhile
...can be 1,5 to 4 time as long as fry. Mean while, smolt go to the sea where they complet...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ea where they completely grow up and be a adult salmon which have total length fr...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...der 80 cm, the longest one in fry, smolt , and salmon. after 5 year, adult salmon ...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...longest one in fry, smolt , and salmon. after 5 year, adult salmon have a journey hom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 965.302439024 71% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14457831325 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.8654400591 2.65546596893 70% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4749373199 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141403660225 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812111786065 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889854332781 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111314885485 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673081325232 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.97 61.2550243902 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.5 10.3012195122 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.03 11.4140731707 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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