The picture below shows the process of making clothes from recycled plastic bottles

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The picture below shows the process of making clothes from recycled plastic bottles.

The diagram gives information about the steps involved in manufacturing clothes from recycled plastic bottles.
In general, there are a total of 13 steps, including three main stages: collecting recycling bottles from garbage dumps, weaving, and finally completing products like t-shirts and jeans. It can be seen that the whole process is nearly made by machines.
At the beginning of the process, bottles are gathered from garbage collection places in the city, these collected plastic bottles are delivered by garbage trucks to recycling factories. After that, workers sort plastic bottles manually and send them to the crashing funnel-shaped machines to cut into small pieces with two grinding parts. The next step is that the cutting pieces are rinsed with washing equipment and dried in the sun for 10 hours.
After that, those cutting pieces experience the process of melting at a high temperature to turn to melted plastic and pouring this liquid into tube molds with small holes. Then the yarn is produced and sewed by a winding machine into rolled cloth, which is finally processed into end products, namely t-shirts, food containers, and bags.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...stic bottles. In general, there are a total of 13 steps, including three main stage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, so, then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28108108108 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53884935085 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664864864865 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.847276531 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.125 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263099873996 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107813316553 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786409441838 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161782867873 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482623852841 0.0819641961636 59% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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