The pictures below show how tea is produced They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea

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The pictures below show how tea is produced. They also illustrate the process of making a cup of tea.

The diagram illustrates the process of making tea, and how a cup of tea is made  the entire process by which tea is manufactured and the procedure to make a cup of tea. It can be seen that the process is quite simple with 18 stages, starting from sowing the tea seeds in India and China and terminating at enjoying a nice cup of tea at home.
To begin with, tea seeds are shown/cultivated on farms and then the sun shines, causing the seeds to grow into plants. When the plants have grown sufficiently, the leaves are then picked/harvested and put into baskets. Subsequently, the tea leaves are spread out in the sun to be dried. Once the final tea products have been packed into boxes, these boxes are then loaded onto lorries, which take them to supermarkets for sale.
To make a cup of tea, customers buy a box of tea and take it home from the supermarket. After filling the kettle with water and put it on the stove to boil, the water (ủa em viết như vậy thì water nó đổ nước vào ấm rồi bắc lên bếp luôn hả? xem lại công thức V-ing này) is poured into a cup. Having been left in the cup for two minutes, the teabag is then removed, and the tea is now ready to drink. At this point, milk and sugar can be added for more flavor. The whole procedure ends up with a nice cup of hot tea which is ready to be enjoyed.

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