The picture illustrates the process of manufacturing tomato ketchup.
It is a 15 step process that starts with harvesting and picking them from farms through baskets and includes labelling, quality check and also enjoying its tang with yummy hamburger and fries.
At first, labor are recruited to pick the tomatoes from the fields and followed by spreading them in a place to sort them, deciding whether they goes to delivery or dismantled. The sorted good tomatoes are sent to factory through trucks and delivered. Then the fresh veggies are being removed from stalk, seeds and skin and stored in a container.
After filling the container, tomatoes are being crushed and the pulp is being added with adequate vinegar, sugar and salt and other necessary ingredients making the mixture ready for boiling. It is left to atmosphere to cool down for about two hours and filled in the ketchup containers. The filled containers are then labelled, checked for all safety measures and delivered to supermarket, and are being enjoyed by the a lot of customers with their every day meal.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...ace to sort them, deciding whether they goes to delivery or dismantled. The sorted g...
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Line 9, column 129, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'a' is left.
Suggestion: the; a
...o supermarket, and are being enjoyed by the a lot of customers with their every day m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 6.8 221% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1404494382 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54900833749 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7331186098 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.375 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0725405476894 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384291536982 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483661714861 0.0843802449381 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0486247304503 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573438073666 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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