The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is madeSummarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The given pictures demonstrate the manufacturing process of ketchup. Overall, there are 15 steps to be done to produce a bottle of ketchup.
First of all, farmers harvest tomatoes from their farm and put in baskets. Because of that, the quality of tomatoes provides the final requested consistency of the ketchup, farmers carefully carry out sorting process by hands. After being transported to factory by trucks, the tomatoes are brought to a removal process in order to clean from stalks, seeds, skins, etc. Having been collected into containers, the processed tomatoes are crushed and turned into liquid. Next, with adding ingredients including sugar, salt, and vinegar, they are ready to boil.
Taking about two hours for cooling process to prevent flavor loss, the tomato liquid is filled into the bottle and labeled on the body of the bottle. To guarantee quality of the final product of ketchup, inspectors check all ketchup bottles and remove any bottles having defects. The bottles passed quality control step, are packaged into the box. At just before the final stage, manufacturers distribute their own ketchup to supermarkets. Finally, the customers can enjoy the tomato ketchup with their food.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, so, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1019.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27979274611 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54092123166 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637305699482 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2037782462 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9166666667 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.08333333333 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135907952227 0.215688989381 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549866746221 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379260107373 0.0843802449381 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103036800773 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161200125701 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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