The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
These pictures illustrate the steps involved in making tomato ketchup. There are 15 stages in the diagram, from picking tomatoes to enjoying them with food.
The first step is that the tomatoes are picked by the farmer and put into the baskets. After the picking stage, the tomatoes are classified which selects only good ones. Following this, skin, seeds and stalk have been removed from the vegetables, they are then filled into containers. In order turn them into liquid form, tomatoes have been covered and crushed. Sugar,vinegar and salt are added to the tomatoes, so that put it in stove to boil.
having been left in the pot for two hours, the ketchup are poured into bottles and properly labelled. Once bottles have been packed into boxes, the boxes are then checked for quality control. At this point, the boxes are delivered to supermarkets, where they are put on the shelves to be sold. The last step is that customers can buy the tomato ketchup bottle and enjoy it with hamburger and fries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enjoying them with food. The first step is that the tomatoes are picked by the f...
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Line 2, column 368, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , vinegar
...oes have been covered and crushed. Sugar,vinegar and salt are added to the tomatoes, so ...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Having
...toes, so that put it in stove to boil. having been left in the pot for two hours, the...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80924855491 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28476571344 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606936416185 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.695414673 43.030603864 30% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.6363636364 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.72727272727 5.23603664747 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112613213099 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049447929812 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517994923867 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898327553104 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392855121296 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.2329268293 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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