The process chart depicts the recycling progress of glass bottles in different stages which are given in the chart.
the first step of recycling where glass bottles collected by public places and, bottles are different sorts of colors like green, brown and clear. After this, the glass bottles sent by transportation for the third step is classification. In this step, metal caps and plastic caps are separated from bottles.
Moving further, metal caps and plastic caps send for the processing plant and where the glass is broken to convert into new ones. On further stage, raw and glass material collected that sent my car into the glass factory. This first process is furnace with a temperature of 1200 degree Celcius. At the last stage, the melted mixture used to make fresh bottles.
Overall, all steps are necessary as, if one step skips the process can spoil and, in this progress have seven steps as well, present in a proper way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...stages which are given in the chart. the first step of recycling where glass bot...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a proper way" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...gress have seven steps as well, present in a proper way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 785.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90625 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35729419833 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0177169603 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2222222222 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146687475171 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644204604348 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277114142885 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889073286646 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418673699792 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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