It would not be incorrect to state that nowadays people are not hale and hearty as they were in past.A cluster of like minded people voice that everyone should adopt vegetarian owing to its great benefits, which it offers to people. However, I could not agree more on it due to some well-established facts that would be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are slew of benefits of vegetarian diet.Firstly, vegetarian diet is very cheaper, and it is accessible for both rich and poor people. Secondly, fruits and vegetables help to reduce the weight of a person. Therefore, it can solve the over weight problems such as obesity. Lastly, this diet contains a
almost negligible amount of face. Hence, it is easy to digest, and maintains our digestive system in a proper condition.
On the contrary, a certain amount of meat is necessary because it is a part of balanced diet. Moreover, non vegetarian diet is a good source of protein, and it help to make muscles more stronger and flexible.To cite an example of it, Omega 3 fatty acid which is made up of fish, helps to increase the concentration of brain and eye's.That is why the role of non vegetarian diet can not be neglected in medical field.Not only this, meat realted diets are very essential for athletes, wrestlers and players because it helps to increase their performance by making a good physique.
To conclude, after ponderwing over all the above discussions it is quite evident that, although vegetarian diet offers some benefits, still far reaching positive impact of non vegetarian meat can not be ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 5.60731707317 410% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 270.0 196.424390244 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91111111111 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79133481843 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 106.607317073 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 283.868780488 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.554518481 43.030603864 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.6 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.23603664747 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00531280310757 0.215688989381 2% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0011258436395 0.103423049105 1% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0033775309185 0.0843802449381 4% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00203004237591 0.15604864568 1% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00406008475183 0.0819641961636 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 40.7170731707 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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