The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculture land become less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three region of the world during the 1990.

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The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agriculture land become less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three region of the world during the 1990.

The circular chart highlights the four main causes of land degradation, and the tabular chart depicts the affected degraded land in three different regions during the year of 1990. The data is calibrated in percentum.
It can be seen that, during the year 1990, over grazing land had 35%, and the second land degrade was over-cultivation that was 28%. Moreover the deforestation area had been 30% degrade and the last one was othe land that was degradation had 7% further more causes of land Degradation other, over-cultivation, over grazing and deforestation had been 7%, 28%, 35% and 30% respectively.
As far as, trend was concerned that three different nations (North America, Europe and Oceania). Firstly North America total land degraded 5% and second one was Europe that was 23% degrade, and and the last one nation was the Oceania had been 13% total area degraded. further more the country North America had deforestation, over-cultivation and over grazing was 0.2, 3.3, and 1.5 degraded.
Overall, it is evident the most of percentum total land degradation had been 23% in europe. ratherthen the causes of land degradation was over grazing that was 35% total degradation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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...nd one was Europe that was 23% degrade, and and the last one nation was the Oceania had...
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Suggestion: Further
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Suggestion: Ratherthen
...and degradation had been 23% in europe. ratherthen the causes of land degradation was over...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12435233161 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95415860699 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476683937824 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6713219785 43.030603864 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.888888889 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.13902439024 615% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1121697775 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633167448964 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881687741704 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106652551028 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100231214603 0.0819641961636 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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