The given pie chart depict about the energy consumption in an Australian house, and tables shows about the electricity usage according to the number of the residents.
Overall, the maximum number of energy used by heating and cooling, while 6 or more inhabitants in a single house consumed more energy.
Having a quick glance on the pie chart reveals that 38% of energy used by heating and cooling, closely followed by the water heating which was marked 25%. However, cooking used 4% of energy, while lighting and phrases share are equal proportion. The usage by stand power was considerable lower. The other applications used almost one fifth of energy.
looking at the table chart, 5000 to 6500 kilowatt electricity used by a single person, while it was lower as compared to the proportion of of two people. Three person in a house consumed 7500 to 10000 kilowatt energy per year. The maximum limit for the people 6 or more people was 16000.
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...he number of the residents. Overall, the maximum number of energy used by hea...
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...r of energy used by heating and cooling, while 6 or more inhabitants in a single ...
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...% of energy used by heating and cooling, closely followed by the water heating wh...
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...r heating which was marked 25%. However, cooking used 4% of energy, while lightin...
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...ns used almost one fifth of energy. looking at the table chart, 5000 to 6500 kilowa...
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...att electricity used by a single person, while it was lower as compared to the pr...
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.... The maximum limit for the people 6 or more people was 16000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88271604938 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50316824089 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592592592593 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5032219725 43.030603864 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212626078611 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782218860508 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663334912689 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132907983638 0.15604864568 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586728053723 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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