Poverty and hunger, are still major problems in todays world. However, some considered economic boost as a useful tool, while others think it cause environmental problems. The essay will discuss both the views and will give personal opinion.
On the one hand, people who in the side of former side expect the industrialization growth in the part of the earth where the people under the povert conditions. Therfore, it will provide employments to the residents, so it become a source of their earnings which end up the poverty. Moreover, hunger is a second big issue of decusion, researchers should do search to growth the production of crops. Interestingly, when the production become more from consumption huger will die automatically.
On the other hand, advocates of environmental side viewed it harmful for autmosphere, they believe that it is a negative development. For example the more availability of companies produce more pollution, which can cause the global warming and climate change. Not only this but also, the over use of fertiliser can be the reason on air pollution.
In conclusion, after watching both the sides I safely reach on result that boom in economic only single way to eliminate the poverty and hunger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, second, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1039.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16915422886 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96042893877 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 106.607317073 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4859540731 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4545454545 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 5.23603664747 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0224161493069 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00727319368222 0.103423049105 7% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.011961314389 0.0843802449381 14% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0112228223856 0.15604864568 7% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0130292599387 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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