PIE CHART ON DIFFERENT EXPENDITURES ON MOVIE

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PIE CHART ON DIFFERENT EXPENDITURES ON MOVIE

The given pie chart portrays the allocation of different expenditures in the production of a movie.

Overall, producing a film is not only a time-consuming process but also involves enormous expenditures, and this will be continued in the future too. To be more precise, the actors' salaries draw out the highest proportion whereas the funds spend on logistics constitutes the lowest proportion.

Analysing each expense profoundly, the percentage of actors' salaries account for 36% which is the largest of all expenses. However, the percentage of equipment comprises less than half of the actors' salaries. Moving towards the other portion of expenditures, the percentage of marketing stands at one-fifth of the entire budget, while the percentage of the film crew adds up to 12% which is half of the marketing.

Nevertheless, there are some other segments of expenses too that are drawn in a film-making process. The director's fee and the writer's fee, both combined accounts for 10% of the whole budget. Conversely, the percentage of logistics amounts to 4% which is at the lowest of all outlays.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, however, if, nevertheless, so, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24293785311 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04909972957 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621468926554 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7849942568 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.111111111 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0853637073245 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488083322574 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13805081087 0.0843802449381 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109818747579 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190211650431 0.0819641961636 232% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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