According to the charts show pollutants entering a particular area of ocean in 1997 and in 2007 the ratio of domestic sewage, the ratio of pollutants from the air and the ratio of offshore oil all showed different degrees of increase from 1997 to 2007. On the contrary, the ratio of marine transport waste, the ratio of industrial waste and the ratio of farm waste all showed various degrees of decrease from 1997 to 2007. Especially, from 1997 to 2007, the ratio of litter has disappeared, from four per cent to zero per cent To be more specific, the proportions of domestic sewage, pollutants from the air and offshore oil respectively soared fourteen per cent, three per cent and ten per cent from 1997 to 2007 and the proportions of marine transport waste, industrial waste and farm waste respectively decreased fourteen per cent, seven per cent and two per cent from 1997 to 2007. Pollutants from air accounted for the largest share of total pollutants in 1997. But, pollutants from air replaced it in2007
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: sherin rijo
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81034482759 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60937894944 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 71.0 106.607317073 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.408045977011 0.547539520022 75% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 149.231900075 43.030603864 347% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.4 112.824112599 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8 22.9334400587 152% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0759261290123 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535036102163 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251166418253 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759261290123 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.2329268293 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.21 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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