The pie chart show online sales for retail sectors from 2005 to 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart give information about home shopping for peddle sphere in Canada.
It is clear that rated the online sales for retailers sectors has increased significantly from 2005 to 2010. While in 2005 food and beverage relatively stable but in 2010 has doubled.
Look at the first pie chart in 2005. It can be seen that rated for online sales retail sectors in the video games is the lowest among four segments with a figure of 18% but this figure rose to 23% in 2010. Meanwhile, has 35% of online sales in the electronic five percents have number is 30%.
With online sales home and food, in 2005 have number highest rated online sales is 25%. But to in 2010 that number down two times with figure of 15%. With home shopping in food and beverage is 22% but in 2010 has highest significantly is 32%. So, it can be seen that people in Canada liked shopping online about video games and food than technology and furniture.
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- Nowadays most people try to balance between work and other parts of their lives Unfortunately not many achieve this balance What are the problems with this Suggest some solutions to solve the problems 84
- Young people are often influenced in their behaviors and situations by others the same age this is called peer pressure This will support this argument by analyzing the merits mentioned below 56
- Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want Some countries alluring old people to vocations to whatever age that they want This essay will examine both sides of argument before a reasoned conclusion is drawn 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51785714286 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23333301604 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8509970311 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282073304261 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124229378778 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901862014224 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196711675361 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699064351114 0.0819641961636 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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