The pie chart shows the percentage of CO2 emissions by the 6 biggest polluters in 2015 while bar graph shows the top 6 emitters in the same year.
The pie chart shows the percentage of CO2 emissions by the 6 biggest polluters in 2015 while bar graph shows the top 6 emitters in the same year.
Overall, it is clear that although China and US contributes half of the world's CO2 emissions, Saudi Arabia tops the emission in per person. Interestingly, despite being in the top 3 global emitters, developing nations of India and China are not among in highest CO2 producers on a per person basis.
According to the pie chart, 31% of the CO2 emissions came from China, followed by 17% produced by the US. India, Russia, Japan and Germany accounted for approximately one fifth and the rest of the CO2 came from all other nations of the world.
In terms of emissions per person, Saudi Arabia tops by producing 16 metric tonnes followed by the US, Australia and Canada who are producing around 15 metric tonnes each. Meanwhile, South Korea and Russia released least amount of carbon dioxide which were 12 and 10 metric tonnes respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 206, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'released the least'.
Suggestion: released the least
...each. Meanwhile, South Korea and Russia released least amount of carbon dioxide which were 12 ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84795321637 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59855826263 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.040774762 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.428571429 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 5.23603664747 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362372314428 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.196788034644 0.103423049105 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.330872437113 0.0843802449381 392% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.309582760988 0.15604864568 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.399624579559 0.0819641961636 488% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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