The pie chart shows the percentage of persons arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reasons for arrest.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of men and women who arrested from 1990 to 1994, in a duration of five years and the bar chart depicts the percentage of reasons for arrest.
Overall, as it can be seen males arrested more than females and the most recent reasons were public drinking and drink driving.
As is given in the pie charts, males arrested a little more than 30%, whereas there was a tiny share by 9% of females arrested. it is clear that 68% of men and almost 90% of women not arrested in five years ending 1994.
The bar chart provides efficient information about reasons for the most recent arrest between males and females. public drinking was ahead reason with roughly 30% and about 37% for the males and females respectively. After that, drinking driving by 26% for men and a little less than 15% was the second reason. Breach of order, assault, theft and other reason, where the most famous reasons to arrest people. On the last rank, no answer appears by 4% for males and approximately 7% among females.
- Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history.Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by newsones.How important is it to maintain old buildings?Should history stand in the way of progress?Give reasons for your ans 56
- The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009 56
- The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999. 61
- When a country develops its technology the traditional skills and ways of life die out It is pointless to try and keep them alive To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 92
- Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us , but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Please discuss the two views and give your own opinion. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 128, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...a tiny share by 9% of females arrested. it is clear that 68% of men and almost 90%...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Public
...ecent arrest between males and females. public drinking was ahead reason with roughly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
second, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64480874317 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30638641959 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579234972678 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7546570444 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4444444444 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415733411397 0.215688989381 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17720427572 0.103423049105 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142662249039 0.0843802449381 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269971332518 0.15604864568 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132034931376 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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