The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

The pie charts below give data on the spending and consumption of resources by countries of the world and how the population is distributed.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts illustrates, the proportion of spendings on different expenditures, rate of consumption of resources by countries, and distribution of world population as per continents.

Overall, the highest expenditure is spent on other categories while clothing being the smallest segment. Asia appears to be the most populated continent, with others being the least populated. USA and Europe depict to be the greatest various resource consumers, meanwhile the rest is used up by other countries.

It is clear by the pie chart that the most world spending goes to other categories taking up to 40%, with food being the second most spent expenditure at almost a quarter. Transportation and housing together make up for 40% spending, while the lowest spending was done on clothing of about one-fifth of the total expenditure.

The continent of Asia occupies more than half of the world population at 57%, with America, Africa and Europe together covering almost the other half of the world at 48%, with some other portion of population situated in other continents.

Resources at large are consumed by America and Europe, at about 60%, while the rest 40% of the resources are shared among various countries.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26530612245 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89625201225 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551020408163 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2107941936 43.030603864 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.0 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139260983086 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671827383661 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626029127559 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925633044509 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667543783017 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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