the pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.
The pie chart illustrates the comparison of five different energy production in France in the year 1995 and 2005.
Overall, at the beginning of the period, petrol was the most consumed energy production in 1995, while nuclear and other energy production reached a high peak in percentage in 2005. Coal and gas sources slightly double at the end of the year.
Nuclear and other energy sources were least segmented in 1995 with 4.90% and 6.40%. However, both energy production has been increased in one-tenth in 2005. Coal and gas percentage was 29.80% in 1995 and slightly rose to 30% in 2005.
Petro was the most gradually used energy production in 1995, unfortunately, in 2005 petrol digits fell down from 29.7% to 19.55% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 631.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 122.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17213114754 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.32345618554 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91209794334 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 68.0 106.607317073 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 170.1 283.868780488 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2522657494 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1428571429 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206311681885 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108875460328 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132737437603 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167972523159 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.143240898383 0.0819641961636 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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