The two pie charts compare the various forms of energy production in the year 1995 and 2000 in terms of percentage.
Overall, at the begining of the period as well as at the end of the period coal contributed the most in the production of energy.In contrast, other resources made up the smallest segment of the chart and were least responsible for yielding energy.
In 1995, energy output by coal and gas accounted for 29.80% and 29.63%.The figure increased to 30.93% and 30.31% respectively in 2000.Nuclear as well as other resources rose up from 6% to 10.10% and 4.9% to 9.10% respectively.
Petroleum is the only source of energy which saw a tremendous decrease from 29.7% to 19.55%.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Sagarjango
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 572.0 965.302439024 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 118.0 196.424390244 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84745762712 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.29587325169 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80604469211 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 157.5 283.868780488 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.4054893907 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 112.824112599 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 5.23603664747 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133275367813 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932991596398 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926250879162 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932991596398 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926250879162 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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