The pie chart compares the percentage of the shopping online for different retail sector in New Zealand between two years: 2003 and 2013.
It is clear that there are many differences between figures for 2003 and the data from 2013. Overall, the proportion of online sale that bought clothes and travel fell, but the statistic of books and film/music increased in decade.
In 2003, the percentage of travel was the biggest at 36% and the figure for clothes was second at 24%. But in 2013, the data for travel decreased significantly to 29%, and the figure for clothes fell dramatically to 16%.
In contrast, the percentage of film/music in 2003 was 21%, but the figure in 2013 was 33%. Similar with book, the proportion in 2003 and 2013 was 21% and 33% respectively. In 2013, the biggest percentage was film/music and the smallest was clothes.
- The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. 56
- The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and 2013 was 21% and 33% respectively. In 2013, the biggest percentage was film...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 703.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 145.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84827586207 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62848206287 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503448275862 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 193.5 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6881026091 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.875 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.23603664747 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304357107799 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148518173726 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.158087047543 0.0843802449381 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231522156314 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.190947197632 0.0819641961636 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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