The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The amount of electricity units which are made by different duel types in Australia and France are shown for years 1980 and 2000 by the below pie charts.
To begin with, in Australia, coal is responsible for most of electricity units production in both years. Its production increases from 50 units in 1980 to 130 units in 2000. Although the total electricity production increases from 100 units in 1980 to 170 units in 2000, units of electricity production by oil and natural gas decrease. Electricity production by oil and natural gas falls from 10 units and 20 units respectively to 2 u...
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