The graph illustrate the consumption of 4 types of food used in the world in 2008. The figures are compared to the amouts of food used in China and India in the same year.
As an overall trend, the two countries showed different food consumption from world avarange, while processed food consumtion still had the largest percentages in all the three charts.
In particular, processed food consumtion was the higest in the world, accounting for 41%, which was followedby vegetables and fruits at 29% and animal food at a quarter. Only 4% consisted of nut and seeds consumption.
In India, both vegetable and processed food were used the most in the year 2008 with percentages of 34% and 32% repectively, nuts and seeds used in this country showed the largest proportion among the three charts given, making up 19% at this time.
- The pie charts show the average consumption of food in the world in 2008 compared to two countries india and China. Write a report to university lecture and describe the data. 56
- The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The graph illustrate the consumption of 4 types of food used...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, still, while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 694.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88732394366 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69124673088 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605633802817 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.6148132384 43.030603864 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260344546935 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130421838652 0.103423049105 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735028628162 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161834825678 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.071174607855 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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