The pie charts show the electricity generated in Canada from all sources in the year 2013.

Essay topics:

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Canada from all sources in the year 2013.

The pie chart illustrates the percentage of the electricity generated in Canada from all sources in 2013.

There are three main sources of taking over more than ten percents which are temperature control, water heating and other appliances. They occupy individually thirty-eight percents, twenty-five percents, and sixteen percents. The total of them, which is seventy-nine percents, is more than the half of the percentage which domains the most of the generated electricity.

The other sources whose percentage of generated electricity are lower than ten percents are fridges and freezers, lighting, cooking and stand-by power. They separately stand for seven percents, seven percents, four percents and three percents. To add them up, the total amount of the percentage will be twenty-one percents.

We could prove that the number of the pie chart sums up to one hundred percents. And also, we could see that the two main sources, temperature adjustment and water heating, excluding the percentage of other appliances already take over the place of the most percentage of the electricity generated in Canada.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: seventy-nine
...n percents. The total of them, which is seventy nine percents, is more than the half of the ...
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Line 5, column 304, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-one
... total amount of the percentage will be twenty one percents. We could prove that the nu...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'so']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24 0.268076937826 90% => OK
Verbs: 0.12 0.116061578633 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.085 0.0759168565197 112% => OK
Adverbs: 0.035 0.0366838410393 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.03 0.0131127313244 229% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12 0.155750635184 77% => OK
Participles: 0.035 0.0379272487307 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73096700552 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.01 0.0210936926555 47% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.01 0.00175180941692 571% => OK
Determiners: 0.095 0.0948980150116 100% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015 0.00437022459523 343% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.02 0.00967000014798 207% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1119.0 1161.00487805 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.9 90% => OK
Chars per words: 6.28651685393 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73763899035 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.342696629213 0.337110787985 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292134831461 0.247514529752 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.224719101124 0.171178102325 131% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.191011235955 0.112407865282 170% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73096700552 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516853932584 0.546246751206 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.2225980989 49.3433353143 88% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 8.93414634146 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7777777778 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0327727026 42.9750493124 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 135.714022679 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 23.0094962315 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.222222222222 0.689975730869 32% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 48.9912609238 47.7609492067 103% => OK
Elegance: 2.13513513514 2.94281807926 73% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401348792935 0.418131533498 96% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.154515799796 0.181151798455 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.10864450779 0.0850326197045 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.67308567886 0.706616315825 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173823173272 0.157042692854 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220700791569 0.228904883108 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.226131631178 0.108899403657 208% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.388755838498 0.367819155151 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.109662460163 0.0812612215331 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.371758721852 0.316326947829 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.237441073356 0.0921553760075 258% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.08536585366 171% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 7.1512195122 112% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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