The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
The pie graphs display the survey result based on under 18s leisure and cultural activities. The first pie chart, it is illustrated the boy’s cultural and pastime activities while the second pie graph, it is displayed girl’s recreational activities who take part in.
Overall, we can see that basketball and computer games account for the highest proportion among boys, in the contrary dancing and reading are the most popular among girls.
Participating in pastime activities such as playing computer games take up just over a quarter of the total and playing basketball remains at around a third. Therefore, listening to music and skateboarding are nearly the same proportion /10% and 11%/.
In contrast, for girls’ dancing stands for the highest proportion around 27%. The next significant leisure activity is the reading makes up nearly a fifth, however among boys it is the insignificant minority, only 2%. What is more, playing computer games represent just over 15% among girls, while for boys this percentage is duplicated. The remaining three categories make up nearly a third of all pastime activities.
- Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- TOP TEN COUNTRIES WITH THE HIGHEST POPULATION Country 2000 Population 2019 Population 2050 Expected Pop Growth Pop 2000 2019 1 China 1 268 301 605 1 420 062 022 1 301 627 048 11 9 2 India 1 006 300 297 1 368 737 513 1 656 553 632 36 0 3 United States 282 49
- The chart below gives demographic information about the ten most populated countries from 2000 to the present as well as the projected population in 2050.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rel 78
- Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 425, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...arly a third of all pastime activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, therefore, third, while, in contrast, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40449438202 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88033548979 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601123595506 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5854581809 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.888888889 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211988984455 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900083346405 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11417234331 0.0843802449381 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127713808624 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154613607977 0.0819641961636 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 11.4140731707 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.