Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
overpopulation has become one of the most concerning issues facing countries today because in an interconnected and interdependent world, each country should be responsible for limiting their populations. this essay agrees totally with this initiative because of the environmental and health problems caused by overpopulation.
The primary reason why becoming the causes of several contagious diseases are inevitably connect to the population growth worldwide in particular, small, fragile and conflict-affected countries, such as sub Saharan africa and the least developed Asian nations. overpopulation can impact tremendously on poverty rate, malnutrition and sanitation a lot. take America for instance, a person uses 160 gallons water while in africa or India they only use 5 gallons of water per day. As a result, the water scarcity and lack of food are resulting in several contagious diseases and ailments including cholera, mumps as well as chicken pox.
The second main reason is that if we do not take into consideration to eliminate overpopulation, we will face some difficulties in environmental areas. In the world, one in three humans drive a car, burn a charcoal or coal, use too much electricity and also throw wastes a lot. it will bring many side effects explicitly, connecting to rapid increase in the atmosphere of methane, carbon dioxide and greenhouse gas emissions. one of the most obvious example that shows global warming in our planet.
In conclusion, however some people will argue overpopulation is not the primary reason to tackle these issues, I believe that eliminating the growth of population would be the alternative choice, which has not only drawbacks of health issues but also, promotes the environmental disasters too. it is recommended that, the most significant solutions would be progressively empowering women and girls about the reproductive system as well as substantially eliminating dumping and minimizing the release of chemicals in the air.
- Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
- TOP TEN COUNTRIES WITH THE HIGHEST POPULATION#Country2000Population2019Population2050Expected Pop.Growth Pop %2000 - 20191China1,268,301,6051,420,062,0221,301,627,04811.9 %2India1,006,300,2971,368,737,5131,656,553,63236.0 %3United States282,162,411329,093 11
- The pie graphs below show the result of a survey of children's activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate. 84
- Planet earth cannot sustain us unless countries limit their populations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 11
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52768729642 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27782800596 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644951140065 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3917680854 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.416666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5833333333 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0626576433853 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0211114728634 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406530718368 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416314193794 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548948238295 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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