Provided illustrations represent changes in health centre made from 2005 till present.
In 2005 centre had a south entrance from twelve spaces car park with Reception desk located opposite entrance at the end of the hall. Over the years entrance have been moved to south-west with reception desk located next to entrance on the left hand side, facing newly established children's play area. Parking slots increased to total of 30. In 2005 health centre had only three large consulting rooms (CR), however, over the years centre developed another one and currently has 4 CR, which are smaller and located next to each other on south east side of the building.
The garden located north had ben cut to provide space for Minor operation room, which is located north west above the office.
Over the last 13 years Health centre increased in size, however all rooms had to sized down, except Physiotherapy room, which remained same sized.
- The Graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kindom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- the pie charts show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010. 56
- These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than following a healthy lifestyle.To what extent do you agree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own kn 89
- Many young people change their jobs and careers. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Nowadays many young people are often spending their free time in a shopping center. This has a negative effect on the youth and the society to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and relevant examples. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 569, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her on south east side of the building. The garden located north had ben cut to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98717948718 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33093706202 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647435897436 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6203968779 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.142857143 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114586863602 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596510907568 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621724359708 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836550814815 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640434228677 0.0819641961636 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 61.2550243902 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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