The plans below show the layout of a university's sports center now, and how it will look after redevelopment.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided plans depict the design of a University sports center now and after some renovation works and compares the changes for the constructions. Generally speaking, the redeveloped center will be 3 times larger than the current one, and in addition to the swimming pool and gym, there will be a leisure pool, sports hall, and dance studios.
According to the current layout, in the middle is a 25-meter swimming pool and around it are the gym, seating area, welcoming reception area, changing room in four directions north, east, south, and west.
After the construction and development, the center will expand to the east and west. The gym will be doubled from the existing one to the east, and in front of it will be the sports hall and two dance studios. There will be two more symmetrical changing rooms across the reception area, a café next to the one on the left and a sports shop next to the one on the right. Besides, the western rest of the center is a big leisure pool.
In summary, after the construction, the sports center will be expanded to add more facilities for students to play and practice sports while maintaining its original design.
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- The plans below show the layout of a university s sports center now and how it will look after redevelopment Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 42
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 175, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...he east, and in front of it will be the sports hall and two dance studios. There will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, so, while, in addition, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75369458128 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57252302927 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507389162562 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5105251497 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.625 112.824112599 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.375 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183333886548 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921190263847 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520852148766 0.0843802449381 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116007761552 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634299418389 0.0819641961636 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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