The plans below show the layout of a university s sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment

Essay topics:

The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The two layouts illustrate how the sports centre of a university will change after the developments planned in the future.

Overall, a growth in the size of the sports centre is observed after the manipulations. Also, there are significant changes in the facility according to the planned improvements.

Currently, a 25-meter-long pool is situated in the middle of the sports centre. Moreover, pool is surrounded by a changing room, a gym, a seating area and a reception which are located to the west, north, east and south of the university sports centre, respectively. Additionally, there are two outdoor courts which are to the west and east of the facility.

According to the future plans, university sports centre will grow in size due to the new departments. The 25-meter-long pool and the surroundings (changing room, gym, seating, reception) will not be removed. However, gym will be extended to the east. Furthermore, instead of the western outdoor court, an additional pool, which will be used for leisure activities, will be built to the west of the sports centre. Changing rooms will be added to the south-west and south-east of the facility. In addition, sports shop and café will be opened to the west and east of the entrance. Finally, changing room and dance studios will be constructed to the east of the sports facility.

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Average: 8.3 (145 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 658, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
... will be constructed to the east of the sports facility.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07657657658 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97811798865 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.459459459459 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5362969704 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6923076923 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 5.23603664747 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231094560461 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104134106958 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10460824935 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199234447673 0.15604864568 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135611176632 0.0819641961636 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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